Photography crit 2

For the second photography project we had to take 6 photos which showed a cycle with a reveal. I decided to do mine on tidying my shoes. At first, the camera can only see the shoes from close to the ground- this is an interesting perspective as it appears to be different people standing together. From here, each photo shows the shoes in different positions, and finally reveals my hand moving the shoes and arranging them to how they were at the beginning, but with a new perspective. I think that I achieved this well in some ways, with altering the perspective, however, it appears quite confusing and does not clearly portray a loop. Despite this I think that the element of surprise when the perspective changes creates an interesting ending for the photo series.